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if the business sold modern designs, but sales were poor, a better strategy might be to change the range and target businesses that want a more traditional look for their offices.

娃娃妈

假如那生意是卖时髦设计(前后文看应该是办公室装修),但销售很差,一个更好的企划可能是改变生意的范围和目标,给他们的办公室更传统的外观.

宁彩臣

改变销售计划范围和目标终端客户
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可能会好点

一颗松树

原帖由 246 于 2008-3-7 18:05 发表
+ o* ~, I$ Q- i8 n" z% kif the business sold modern designs, but sales were poor, a better strategy might be to change the range and target businesses that want a more traditional look for their offices.

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0 k4 K- G* B& C  e& L2 y设定生意对象为那些对他们服务带有些稍微保守想法的生意。（潜台词即由当初的现代设计转向偏传统和保守）
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offices，由于不知道上下文，这里暂且翻译成服务而不是营运处，那句话更通顺些。