需要哥哥姐姐们帮我校正

jack99

这是我写的一篇看图说话的作业，请帮我改改错误好吗，先谢谢你们了！

# }% ~+ i% }+ l6 L5 nDaisy is getting up at 6.30h.
* C; ~9 b: E, O6 j. RAnd she sees her cat first.
- Y0 F+ y+ p2 k& B9 c7 tShe goes to thestation by car.
At 8.06h she gets on the train London Waterloo.
0 K% o  h$ W" x! lIn the train Daisy reads the newsletter.
She is at the staton London Waterloo at 9.05h.
7 l8 B6 m  c. }And a friend waits for Daisy.
" @, }8 ^- o1 @' J9 h9 W$ t. \  UAsk eats in a china resteron.
" h6 }( |- W: k* b7 @Then ask shopps.
At 7.30h goes Daisy to house.

foxtail_lb

开始几句写的还明白，咋越到后头越不明白啥意思了呢。。。试着改改：

Daisy GETS up at 6.30h.
She sees her cat first.
6 }$ M8 ]# ]1 }1 z' XThen, she goes to the station by car.
At 8.06h she gets on the train to London Waterloo.
5 Z& z9 W5 A$ J; O* t% fIn the train Daisy reads newspaper.
; L. J! Q5 [/ r  d% g6 MShe arrives at London Waterloo at 9.05h.
There a friend was waiting for her.
Ask eats in a china resteron.(这句话啥意思啊。。。)
Then ask shopps. （这句话也不懂。。。。）
At 7.30h goes Daisy to house. （我把这句话翻译成德文，理解为 At 7：30 Daisy goes home.）

itsfun

Ask eats in a china resteron.
Then ask shopps.
At 7.30h goes Daisy to house.

最后几句也搞不清。试试。
5 b) m1 I8 `5 Z: NThe friend and Daisy ate in a Chinese restaurant.
) t) K1 U. L& [" w) C# sThen they went shopping.
2 h' y9 a7 x, q5 ^1 Q+ @* L6 TAt 7.30 Daisy went home.

jack99

Ask eats in a china resteron.
Then ask shopps.
# {+ T9 ~# t! n9 @/ b6 g% s% [At 7.30h goes Daisy to house.

  }: [: v8 a1 [( K最后几句也搞不清。 ...
itsfun 发表于 2010-5-11 09:44

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    Danke schoen!

jack99

开始几句写的还明白，咋越到后头越不明白啥意思了呢。。。试着改改：
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Daisy GETS up at 6.30h.
She see ...
foxtail_lb 发表于 2010-5-10 19:12

    Danke schoen!