需要哥哥姐姐们帮我校正

jack99

这是我写的一篇看图说话的作业，请帮我改改错误好吗，先谢谢你们了！

Daisy is getting up at 6.30h.
And she sees her cat first.
9 a1 B# {- A/ d* f" Q! TShe goes to thestation by car.
" T# [2 Q- }+ y- j# [At 8.06h she gets on the train London Waterloo.
) u( K/ }4 H/ _3 u5 Q& yIn the train Daisy reads the newsletter.
She is at the staton London Waterloo at 9.05h.
$ T; H; o: y" b, t& L+ x, Z; ZAnd a friend waits for Daisy.
$ h$ [# Z, X* FAsk eats in a china resteron.
: l1 V) U& @- zThen ask shopps.
At 7.30h goes Daisy to house.

foxtail_lb

开始几句写的还明白，咋越到后头越不明白啥意思了呢。。。试着改改：

9 y8 w5 b* K9 ~$ mDaisy GETS up at 6.30h.
$ ^# U( }, W, r' }7 OShe sees her cat first.
9 g- u) v: n; [* t3 V# L) g3 Y) ^Then, she goes to the station by car.
0 ~, k6 w. C7 p$ ~At 8.06h she gets on the train to London Waterloo.
  [2 f7 a1 }8 F6 D- uIn the train Daisy reads newspaper.
6 t" o4 B& i6 G: c0 U& v( qShe arrives at London Waterloo at 9.05h.
There a friend was waiting for her.
Ask eats in a china resteron.(这句话啥意思啊。。。)
Then ask shopps. （这句话也不懂。。。。）
- d$ M# a& J: k" l+ @7 hAt 7.30h goes Daisy to house. （我把这句话翻译成德文，理解为 At 7：30 Daisy goes home.）

itsfun

Ask eats in a china resteron.
4 z8 o, E/ M% @# M3 XThen ask shopps.
! N1 c+ ?  g4 z) k% o# _- d7 gAt 7.30h goes Daisy to house.
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, H7 J: p( h8 x2 i  u% r" G最后几句也搞不清。试试。
The friend and Daisy ate in a Chinese restaurant.
: k% S8 z9 x+ ^* G" a4 IThen they went shopping.
: T- Y1 [6 X  U" \- vAt 7.30 Daisy went home.

jack99

Ask eats in a china resteron.
6 L# m2 F; s/ L! ^# ~Then ask shopps.
% d5 g" I+ I, J& L0 \/ DAt 7.30h goes Daisy to house.
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最后几句也搞不清。 ...
8 ]0 _! Z5 S, L2 B) a' jitsfun 发表于 2010-5-11 09:44

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    Danke schoen!

jack99

开始几句写的还明白，咋越到后头越不明白啥意思了呢。。。试着改改：

+ M+ G  v. |& z. K0 eDaisy GETS up at 6.30h.
6 T, J0 A7 J2 aShe see ...
2 }* M/ G1 V, x" H# Yfoxtail_lb 发表于 2010-5-10 19:12

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    Danke schoen!